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Flash mob_Landscapes_mountains by Stasushka Flash mob_Landscapes_mountains by Stasushka
Decided to practice painting landscapes so I'm taking part in flash mob "30 days -15 landscapes"
If you'd like to join me, I'll be happy if you give a link to your picture in the comments, so that we can do it together ;)
Constructive criticism is highly welcomed!

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So I might be a bit late writing this critique. However I feel as if it deserves one. My eye is not the most discerning, but я знаю, красивое искусство, когда я вижу it!! :D

First, the thing that stood out to me the most was the misty clouds, they are very well drawn, they look fluffy and they give the entire mountain a "cold" feel to them. The clouds are also placed throughout the mountain in such a way that it makes logical sense. At first I was a bit skeptical about the pinkish sky, but you made it work wonderfully with the highlights on the tips of the mountains. Also the small birds in the sky are a nice touch.

Now, what I will say is that when I think of a mountain I think of very jagged, very defined lines. Which I find a bit lacking here, some lines seem to lack purpose... well not purpose so much, but rather definition. I suppose when it comes down to it I would like to see each line more defined (except for the clouds of course).

I understand you probably had a very limited time to do this (the whole 15 landscapes 30 days thing). But still I love your idea for the picture and the execution was good, I look forward to seeing more landscapes!! ^_^ It was an honor to critique your work! :)
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Submitted on
November 28, 2012
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