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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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First, the thing that stood out to me the most was the misty clouds, they are very well drawn, they look fluffy and they give the entire mountain a "cold" feel to them. The clouds are also placed throughout the mountain in such a way that it makes logical sense. At first I was a bit skeptical about the pinkish sky, but you made it work wonderfully with the highlights on the tips of the mountains. Also the small birds in the sky are a nice touch.
Now, what I will say is that when I think of a mountain I think of very jagged, very defined lines. Which I find a bit lacking here, some lines seem to lack purpose... well not purpose so much, but rather definition. I suppose when it comes down to it I would like to see each line more defined (except for the clouds of course).
I understand you probably had a very limited time to do this (the whole 15 landscapes 30 days thing). But still I love your idea for the picture and the execution was good, I look forward to seeing more landscapes!! ^_^ It was an honor to critique your work!
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